I enter the tunnel and start running down its narrow path.
I notice side passages branching off to the left and right.
All of the side paths appear the same as the main tunnel, dirty, dark and noisy.
I hear whoosh and a heard of footsteps with people rushing in different directions.
I look at my map and realise that I'm not in a tunnel but on the London Underground.
Wow Maisie, well done! I like the way you have led me through the unknown and then I appear in the underground. Very accomplished writing!
ReplyDeleteVery proud of your sentences sweetheart. Well done. Keep up the good work. Love mummy & daddy.x
ReplyDeletegreat work year 2!
ReplyDeleteI loved how you managed to tell a whole story with a beginning, a middle and an end in just five sentences Maisie! Fantastic!
ReplyDeleteWow! You've used wonderful descriptive words! I loved 'narrow', 'dirty', 'dark' and 'noisy'. What a great ending!
ReplyDeleteWell done Maisie. I love the ending. Fantastic xxx
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