Monday, 31 March 2014

Finley's 5 Sentence Challenge


''Biff,bang,boom!''
In the blink of an eye the evil , mischievous ,vivid pink goblin found himself  in darkness … Was he in a tunnel ?Angrily he looked around yet he could only see the silhouette of the sinister witch!Her wrinkly arm was as skinny as a   piece of string  but  despite her size he was terrified and every bone in his  body shook like jelly.
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2 comments:

  1. Jenga1 April 2014 at 14:32

    Wow Finley! Wow! This writing really freaked me out! But that's a good thing so well done!

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  2. Unknown16 April 2014 at 02:32

    Finley I love how you have started your sentences! What an exciting start. You have used interesting sentence starters and commas, question marks and even an ellipse. I think with this super star writing you are ready to try the 100 word challenge.

    Thank you for sharing. I really enjoyed reading it. Especially your last sentence "every bone in his body shook like jelly." Fantastic.

    From Miss D 5SC Team
    Sumner, Christchurch, New Zealand

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