Jack swung across the ceiling. His face turned red. His clothes were full of giant's blood.
Jack tried to chop off the two headed giant's head with his axe. The giant smacked Jack to the side. Jack screamed.
Jack spotted an axe. He bounced off the gigantic couch. He tried to chop the giant's head off. "Argh!" the giant screamed.
Jack leapt. He injured the ferocious giant. The giant collapsed.
Jack pounced off the table with an axe. He landed on the giant. Jack cut the giant's head off.
The giant stomped across the woods. The sheep scattered. One scared sheep didn't get away.
Good work y2. I love the word "pounced". Well done.
ReplyDeleteSome very neat handwriting, especially the third photo!
ReplyDeleteWow Year 2 you have been busy! What fantastic imaginations you have - the giant sounds very scary!
ReplyDeleteKeep up your brilliant work!
Wow....I love these descriptive sentences.....well done.
ReplyDeleteHi mr needle and year 2..... From Vancouver island in Canada.
Connor Jay says HI too :-)
Wow....I love these descriptive sentences.....well done.
ReplyDeleteHi mr needle and year 2..... From Vancouver island in Canada.
Connor Jay says HI too :-)
Amazing work year two xxx
ReplyDeleteExcellent work year two - keep it up !
ReplyDeleteWow Year 2 - you've blown my socks off! Will show my Year 1 class tomorrow to help them to write more exciting sentences!
ReplyDeleteLove the writing Y2, very neat!
ReplyDeleteI have shown these to my Year 2 class. They are going to try and write short dramatic sentences in their stories. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteWow!!! Super writing year 2:) And imagination - well done.... Can't wait for more work from you all, clever year2 ha ha....
ReplyDelete"Aciu" Mr Needle:)
The class have asked me to say 'Thanks' for all your kind comments!
ReplyDeleteWonderful, clever children! Keep up the good work!
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