Monday 31 March 2014

Shay's 5 Sentence Challenge


It was a stormy dark night in November. I heard noises in the tunnel. I wondered who made the noises. I felt scared but I was brave. The noises was a zombie being silly. 
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2 comments:

  1. Unknown31 March 2014 at 14:18

    Good use of but - well done.

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  2. Unknown4 April 2014 at 03:56

    A silly zombie would be scary! I'm impressed you were brave. I love the way you've placed the tunnel in a story!

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