One night, a scary ghost flew in the
spooky tunnel. He was all alone, when he
saw Dr Who searching for Darlecks. The
ghost glided through the air to Dr Who and spooked him but Dr Who used his
supersonic screwdriver to make him disappear into thin air. Dr Who screamed and
woke up. It was all a dream.
I love this one Oscar. I love Dr Who too! You have used some great descriptions here to make it more interesting. I love the gliding ghost. I can't wait to read more of your creations.
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I love your use of "glided" to describe how the ghost moved. Perfect choice of word :)
ReplyDeleteCan I borrow your screwdriver....? Love your story, I saw your picture in the local paper, well proud.
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Well done Oscar. Keep up the good work. You have used some good words to describe what is happening. We are proud of you. It might even hit the papers!
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I love that Oscar is using Dr Who as a character. Also what a great word "supersonic":)
ReplyDeleteA delightful story Oscar. Very imaginative.
ReplyDeleteWell done Oscar, very creative. Well done for writing 5 perfect sentences. Great to see you use comma's accurately! Have you thought about doing the 100 word challenge?
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So proud of you Oscar cant wait until you write your first book, I will certainly buy one.
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