Matthias' 5 Sentence Challenge

Slowly, the black shiny train pulls into the station.

Cases as big as boulders are pushed along the platform.

Excited, happy families are off on an adventure.

Smiling, the man picks up his suitcase and walks quickly over to the ticket man.

The bored old ticket collector who has a frowning face grumpily collects the tickets.

Harry's 5 Sentence Challenge

A man ran to get a ticket to get on a train.

He showed it to the ticket officer so he could get through the gates.

He got through the gates to platform 5.

He got on the train and put his luggage away and sat down .

He had a nice journey going to Italy.

Pheobe's 5 Sentence Challenge

… At the train station …

 

Happily the joyful man waved.

Whilst fixing the train, the man who was called Joe, was chatting to the little boy.

Patiently, the people queued up whilst waiting for their train.

The man who looked very hot was pushing a trolley that had a lot of heavy bags on it.

The man, who seemed very confused, asked the guard what was going on.

Lucas' 5 Sentence Challenge

One sunny morning, there were lots of people in the train station, full of steam. Smiling, a wheel tapper was tapping the wheel with a metal stick and if it made a noise it needed fixing or it would break down. A boy was begging to get a ticket for his family while another man was pushing a trolley full of suitcases.  There was an orange automatic train which looked like it could go as fast as lightening and a steam train would go as slow as a snail. An excited family walked past the gate and they wanted to go on one of the trains but they didn’t know which train to get on for their holiday.

Eden's 5 Sentence Challenge

In the station it was as loud as thunder, the people were as busy as bees.

Two birds watched as the tired old man slowly pushed the heavy trolley along

'Is the train on time ?', the 109?'the lady in red quietly said

'Yes', answered the man in blue 'I will get a ticket for you'

Don't forget to have a great time  when you visit Crewe.

Mia's 5 Sentence Challenge

The sailor, who was feeling very jolly because it was his first time on a train, was buying his ticket. He giggled.

Nearly all of the people lined up in each platform, though some others were standing next to the train.

Queuing, the people watched train 109 being fixed by the engineer, who was holding a dirty screwdriver and wearing a white hat.   

The train’s engine was as noisy as a lion roaring loudly through your ear!

Christina's 5 Sentence Challenge

The trains are going, the lights are on.

In the distance the bright red train stood at Platform 8.

There was a man who let pretty people through but one boy had not got his ticket!

The black steam train stood at Platform 7 yet had not one girl or boy on the train but the steam was pouring from the funnel.

The boy quickly bought his ticket and jumped on the bright red train as the whistle blew – the train   roared like a lion as it left Platform 8 on its journey to...

Dominic's 5 Sentence Challenge

Quickly all the trains are in the station and they are all steamed up.

So we bought our tickets after queuing up.

We are going on our holidays because the school’s broken up.

It was early in the morning and as black as coal and we walked on to busy Platform 9.

Oh no! Oh no! We are not travelling anywhere – I’m still in bed and I have just woke up!

Layton's 5 Sentence Challenge

The trains are parked in the station. One train is red and yellow, one is blue and grey. The blue train is very dirty, the red train is all shiney and it   has a posh sign on the side. There are lots of people patiently waiting on the platform. A sailor quickly buys a ticket for his journey.

Megan's 5 Sentence Challenge

The Escape

Knowing she had to somehow sneak on that old steaming train, Evie scrambled under the other passengers’ legs   Suddenly, a pair of hands grabbed her but being so fast she managed to get away. She raced!  In the hustle and bustle of the busy station, the man, with the strong tough hands, lost her.  Finally, crouching down, she crept on to that train as quiet as a tiny whisper.

Emilia's 5 Sentence Challenge

The porter is pushing the trolley full of big, heavy and red suitcases.

The boy asked the conductor: “Can I go to London on that blue train”.

“No, you can't! That train is broken.”- said the conductor loudly.

The man in the blue siute would like to buy a ticket to France but he forgot his money.

The sailor who had an enormous sak wanted to buy a ticket.

Shay's 5 Sentence Challenge

It looks busy at the train station today.

So people queued up for their tickets.

The big boy was excited to go on the train.

He ran ahead from his parents.

Shouting, his parent’s ran after him.

Terry's 5 Sentence Challenge

The train went somewhere far far away where nobody has ever gone before.

There was a lot of people and 2 guards at the front and back so they can watch.

Quickly the train went faster and faster until it reached the station.

Everyone was ready when the train stopped so they can get off.

Steam came out of the funnel the funnel was black and the steam sounded very loud.

Joy's 5 Sentence Challenge

It was a delightful summer holiday.  The beautiful train was ready to take off and it was booming fast! The smoke came out like a gigantic cloud but soon it disappeared. “Ahg… I went on the wrong train!” a little girl cried out loudly. There were some people forgot their tickets, so they were arguing with the ticket’s officer.

Alex's 5 Sentence Challenge

This picture depicts a train station.  It has alot of gates. The train is as fast as litning.  Its steem is like a cloud.  It can cary suit cases but it cant cary a car.  Until you get on the train you have to wate.

 

Jessica's 5 Sentence Challenge

"Tickets please" boomed the conductor.

Sensibly the engineer wore grey overalls so his own clothes would stay clean.

A shiny long bright red train ready for a fast and exciting journey.

The weary tired porter pushed the cumbersome cart. 

Excitedly and proudly the seafaring smart dressed sailor told lady in the ticket office that he was going home to see his family after a long time at sea.

 

Kacey's 5 Sentence Challenge

In the super 6 week holidays, a little girl was waiting for a massive red train to go on holiday to cadbury's world.

Finally, it arrived roaring and echoing coming through the enormous dark train station, she and her family was waiting for 4 hours but it was the wrong train, they had to run to the steam engine.

They got to the steam engine and climbed In the dark brown doors as the driver made the engine  let off a really loud CHOO CHOO after the choo choo  it fired a clowd of grey steam into the air.

The steam made her jump and she was scared for a moment.

She took a deep breath, but before they new it they was there.

Harriet's 5 Sentence Challenge

The dusty old train let out a big, noisy whistle that made me jump with fright!

The train cannot set off yet on its journey but the engineer is working as fast as he can, so we will have to wait or we can take the tram.

Quickly we have run to the tram station, oh no, we have forgotten our luggage!

As quick as lightening, we run back to see the train porter and said "please stop we need our luggage".

I am feeling so tired, my breath is running out and my legs feel really numb but I am happy that I can go on the tram to my holidays.

Maisie's 5 Sentence Challenge

The Train Station.

 

A lonely, old lady was sat waiting at the train station for her son, who she missed so much to arrive home.

She sat through rain, snow, sun and strong blizzards, as she waited patiently for her son.

One busy morning, on platform seven a big, noisy, but very dirty train arrived, it was train 109.

Her very special son leaped off train 109 and couldn't wait to see his mum!

Through the thick smoke the old lady saw her son, she was so happy she ran down the platform and gave him a massive hug!

 

Milly's 5 Sentence Challenge

The driver sounded the horn at the train very slowly.

The little boy raised up his hands with excitement.

It was very busy at the station.

There are lots of families at the station.

The worker at the station had lots of luggage to carry.

 

Kenna's 5 Sentence Challenge

The busy train station all hustle and bustle.

What time does the train leave?

We need to get a ticket and go through gate number seven.

The steam rose like clouds in the sky.

All aboard, let’s go!

Catherine's 5 Sentence Challenge

At the train station it was really busy so people had to wait for a while.

Everyone needed to pay a lot of money.

On the walls at the top there was some numbers.

There was only three trains.

There was so many colours of trains.

Amelie's 5 Sentence Challenge

It is a very busy morning, on a glorious day, in one of Londons' famous train stations.

There are lots of families boarding different types of trains, some short and some as long as a slippery snake!

On platform 8, waiting patiently for its passengers is Rory the super, gleaming, bright red jumbo train.

Last to arrive was the Smith family, who were eager to get on the train as Rory was about to leave.

As Rory left the station he let out a very loud 'Choo choo!' and happily made his long, picturesque journey to Ribby Hall.