Wednesday 7 May 2014

Shay's 5 Sentence Challenge


It looks busy at the train station today.

So people queued up for their tickets.

The big boy was excited to go on the train.

He ran ahead from his parents.
Shouting, his parent’s ran after him.
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2 comments:

  1. Jenga7 May 2014 at 12:23

    I hope the worried parents caught up with the excited boy Shay! Well done.

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  2. Anonymous14 May 2014 at 02:32

    Hi Shay

    It's great how your sentences tell a story and you've written from the point of view of one of the characters in the picture. You could include some speech in your sentences; what could his parents be shouting out to him?

    From Mrs Burnett (Team 5SC)
    www.uhpsroom172014.blogspot.co.nz
    Auckland, NZ

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