Wednesday 7 May 2014

Kacey's 5 Sentence Challenge


In the super 6 week holidays, a little girl was waiting for a massive red train to go on holiday to cadbury's world.

Finally, it arrived roaring and echoing coming through the enormous dark train station, she and her family was waiting for 4 hours but it was the wrong train, they had to run to the steam engine.

They got to the steam engine and climbed In the dark brown doors as the driver made the engine  let off a really loud CHOO CHOO after the choo choo  it fired a clowd of grey steam into the air.

The steam made her jump and she was scared for a moment.

She took a deep breath, but before they new it they was there.

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