In the super 6 week holidays, a little girl was waiting
for a massive red train to go on holiday to cadbury's world.
Finally, it arrived roaring and echoing coming through
the enormous dark train station, she and her family was waiting for 4 hours but
it was the wrong train, they had to run to the steam engine.
They got to the steam engine and climbed In the dark
brown doors as the driver made the engine
let off a really loud CHOO CHOO after the choo choo it fired a clowd of grey steam into the air.
The steam made her jump and she was scared for a moment.
I love your first sentence Kacey. Well done.
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