Monday 31 March 2014

Maisie's 5 Sentence Challenge

I enter the tunnel and start running down its narrow path.

I notice side passages branching off to the left and right.

All of the side paths appear the same as the main tunnel, dirty, dark and noisy.

I hear whoosh and a heard of footsteps with people rushing in different directions.

I look at my map and realise that I'm not in a tunnel but on the London Underground.

William's 5 Sentence Challenge


Mater the tow truck was in the tunnel. The tunnel was dark and dirty Mater was scared. Mater hoped that the tunnel was not going to be long. After a few seconds Mater saw lightning Mc queen and Doc waiting at the other side of the tunnel, they were waiting for the train. Mater was please to see his friends and be out of the tunnel.

Terry's 5 Sentence Challenge



In a spooky terrifying tunnel I walked and saw a big brown bear.

I saw a white wolf in scarborough.

Minto the horse was fleding away from bella the dog.

Daisy the cat found a mouse but the mouse ran as fast as lighting.

As the sun gone dark it was night time.

Shay's 5 Sentence Challenge


It was a stormy dark night in November. I heard noises in the tunnel. I wondered who made the noises. I felt scared but I was brave. The noises was a zombie being silly. 

Shane's 5 Sentence Challenge


 The boy hid in the tunnel  when playing hide and seek  but it was dark  spooky and as long as a motorway he felt afraid so he ran all the way home.

Phoebe's 5 Sentence Challenge

In the tunnel there was a Zombie.
I was in the tunnel going under a river when there was a leak.
I was in the tunnel, it was dark, there were rats and bats! 
It was a very wide tunnel and a friendly giant called Bert lived in it. 
The tunnel was pitch black, as black as could be.

Oscar's 5 Sentence Challenge



One night, a scary ghost flew in the spooky tunnel.  He was all alone, when he saw Dr Who searching for Darlecks.  The ghost glided through the air to Dr Who and spooked him but Dr Who used his supersonic screwdriver to make him disappear into thin air. Dr Who screamed and woke up.  It was all a dream.

Milly's 5 Sentence Challenge



In the tunnel there are lots if lights. 
The driver of the train sounds the horn in the tunnel.
In the tunnel it is dark. 
The train goes in the tunnel. 
In the tunnel it is very noisy.