Monday 31 March 2014

Joy's 5 Sentence Challenge



Elsa went to the darkest tunnel ever, but someone
lives there.  “Agh....” she screamed loudly. She tryed to escape from the tunnel and Elsa used all her power. Unfortunately, her power didn`t work.
Suddenly, a handsome prince appeared in front of her with a beautiful smile…
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3 comments:

  1. Jenga1 April 2014 at 14:27

    Suspenseful! What happens next Joy?

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  2. Catherine Hinchliffe2 April 2014 at 05:41

    Great sentences Joy, I love the way you have kept the reader guessing about who lives there. I'd love to meet the handsome prince with the beautiful smile...

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  3. Unknown16 April 2014 at 02:20

    Fantastic sentences Joy. I really like how you have used speech and an ellipse at the end to let us know there was more to come.
    You have used some great sentence starters like "suddenly" and "unfortunately."

    From Miss D 5SC Team
    Sumner, Christchurch, NZ

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