Monday 31 March 2014

Shane's 5 Sentence Challenge


 The boy hid in the tunnel  when playing hide and seek  but it was dark  spooky and as long as a motorway he felt afraid so he ran all the way home.
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4 comments:

  1. Unknown31 March 2014 at 14:19

    "As long as a motorway" - great description :)

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  2. Anonymous2 April 2014 at 10:28

    I love how you have used the word spooky! MATTHIAS T

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  3. Greta Burton2 April 2014 at 12:41

    Love Hide and Seek:)

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  4. Tracey Bowers (Team 5SC)13 April 2014 at 10:10

    Shane, I love how you have made me feel worried about the little boy by the way you have written your sentences with great describing words. Be careful to remember your capital letters and full stops.
    Keep up the good work.

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