Monday, 31 March 2014

Catherine's 5 Sentence Challenge



Rapunzel went in the tunnel but she saw a witch.
The witch chased her all around the tunnel yet finally she got to the end of the tunnel.
The witch was horrible, she had a wart on her nose.
The witch was really mean and almost caught Rapunzel.
Rapunzel felt very scared when she saw the witch but when she escaped she felt really happy.
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  1. Jenga1 April 2014 at 14:38

    Well done for using but and yet - very useful words.

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  2. Mrs Burnett2 April 2014 at 01:47

    Hi Catherine

    I'm so glad your tunnel story had a happy ending! You've described the witch really well and she sounds very scary. You've done a great job of using different sentence lengths, well done.

    Mrs Burnett (Team 5SC)
    Auckland, NZ
    www.uhpsroom172014.blogspot.com

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