In the tunnel the snowman saw a
rock so he ate it.
Suddenly the whole tunnel started
shaking, the snowman started to fall apart.
He tried to run but he slipped, just then he
heard a loud roaring voice ‘who are you? Why have you eaten my special rock?
The snowman was really scared but tried to say
as brave as a lion as the dark, dark shadow came nearer and nearer...
‘Are you going to stop in bed all
day? Or are you going to eat your breakfast’ his Mum said. It had all been a
dream.
I love "as brave as a lion as the dark, dark shadow came nearer and nearer..." Great sentence!
ReplyDeleteI love your repeating phrases 'dark dark shadow' and 'nearer and nearer' because it must be so dark and very near. What a clever boy! Well done!
ReplyDeletefantastic sentences Eden love your expression
ReplyDeletewell done