Monday 31 March 2014

Alex's 5 Sentence Challenge



One day Fennekin and Wortertl were knoked out. They flew into a tunnel. In the tunnel it was so darck "wow!" Said Fennekin "A real tunnel!!!"Said Wortertl... all off a sudden the lights went on a zoimbei appeared.......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  1. Anonymous1 April 2014 at 08:50

    Ok, son, - you made me proud!!! Very good writing and the speech marks!... Double WOW! Молодець!

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  2. Greta Burton2 April 2014 at 12:56

    Great characters Alex:) Well done...

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  3. Miss Crampton 5SC Team21 April 2014 at 11:25

    Wow what fantastic sentences this sounds really interesting and makes me want to read more! Well done for using speech marks too!

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