Early one morning
I leapt out of bed and went to see my best friends. We went to the park where
there were lots of humongous trees. We saw a tunnel and it looked very scary.
There was a sign which said SPOOKY.
“Shall we go in there?” I said. My friends said “Yes” .So we
went in the tunnel .There were ghosts, skeletons and a wicked old witch with a
boiler, so we ran home. It was too terrifying for us and it was as scary as an
explosion.
Great use of speech marks Lucas.
ReplyDeleteGreat descriptive words and I love the use of humungous!!
ReplyDeleteGreat word "humongous":) I had to check how to pronounce it ha:)
ReplyDeleteWow Lucas, I love your similie 'as scary as an explosion' because that is scary!
ReplyDeleteLucas, I like how you have used speech in your sentences and have created a narrative. I also like your final sentence when you said it was as scary as an explosion.
ReplyDeleteNext time, something to remember is that it is a 5 sentence challenge, you have written a few more.
Miss D (5SC Team)
Christchurch, NZ