Monday, 31 March 2014

Harriet's 5 Sentence Challenge



One day, I was racing through the dark and spooky tunnel, but suddenly the train stopped!

I screamed because I was frightened, so I ran as fast as I could.

Yet the end seemed far, far away.

I could finally see a shining bright light or is it a torch?

I don't believe it, Cinderalla has appeared at the back of the train on the most beautiful golden horse!
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2 comments:

  1. Jenga1 April 2014 at 14:30

    You have used some of my favourite words: but, because, so. Great writing Harriet.

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  2. rmannell7 April 2014 at 06:22

    Hello Harriet,

    I am very impressed by your five sentences because they tell a story. You have used correct capitals, commas, exclamation marks, questions marks as well as full stops in sharing your story. With such writing quality, I can see you are ready for the 100 Word Challenge (100WC) when you are in Year 3.
    Well done, Harriet. Keep writing and sharing the stories you create.

    Ross Mannell (Team 5SC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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