Wednesday, 7 May 2014

Jessica's 5 Sentence Challenge


"Tickets please" boomed the conductor.

Sensibly the engineer wore grey overalls so his own clothes would stay clean.

A shiny long bright red train ready for a fast and exciting journey.

The weary tired porter pushed the cumbersome cart. 

Excitedly and proudly the seafaring smart dressed sailor told lady in the ticket office that he was going home to see his family after a long time at sea.

 

2 comments:

  1. Cumbersome is a great word Jessica. Well done.

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  2. Fantastic work Jessica. I like the sentence about the cart.

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