Wednesday 7 May 2014

Christina's 5 Sentence Challenge


The trains are going, the lights are on.

In the distance the bright red train stood at Platform 8.

There was a man who let pretty people through but one boy had not got his ticket!

The black steam train stood at Platform 7 yet had not one girl or boy on the train but the steam was pouring from the funnel.
The boy quickly bought his ticket and jumped on the bright red train as the whistle blew – the train   roared like a lion as it left Platform 8 on its journey to...

1 comment:

  1. I love your sentence about the boy who was obviously in a rush! Well done Christina.

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