In the
station it was as loud as thunder, the people were as busy as bees.
Two birds
watched as the tired old man slowly pushed the heavy trolley along
'Is the
train on time ?', the 109?'the lady in red quietly said
'Yes',
answered the man in blue 'I will get a ticket for you'
Don't
forget to have a great time when you visit Crewe.
"As loud as thunder"/"as busy as bees" - love it! Well done Eden.
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ReplyDeleteWell done for typing these 5 super sentences all about the picture. I can just imagine the noise and bustle at the station in the wonderful way you described it. Your second sentence is fantastic: I'm going to look again for the birds and the man - what a fab description! Great work.
Well done Eden, these are super sentences.
ReplyDeleteMr Handley
What fantastic description well done. I can imagine all the noise in the station. I wonder if the lady in red enjoyed her visit to crewe.
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