Wednesday 7 May 2014

Joy's 5 Sentence Challenge


It was a delightful summer holiday.  The beautiful train was ready to take off and it was booming fast! The smoke came out like a gigantic cloud but soon it disappeared. “Ahg… I went on the wrong train!” a little girl cried out loudly. There were some people forgot their tickets, so they were arguing with the ticket’s officer.

1 comment:

  1. I do love a delightful summer holiday! What a lovely opening sentence Joy. Well done.

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