Tuesday 1 April 2014

Eliese's 5 Sentence Challenge



One day I went into a dark ENCHANTED tunnel and saw a ghost  "Are!" I ran away as fast as I cud. "HELP ME HELP ME" I SHOUTED as I SHOUTED super man grabbed me and saved me."Why did you save me well tell me now". Then out of the blew a gould ball flew and hit me in the head but I was ok. Then I walked home.
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4 comments:

  1. Jenga1 April 2014 at 14:11

    Well done for using speech marks Eliese.

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  2. Megan's mum4 April 2014 at 07:02

    Wow Elise, Iove your adjective and the way you've put in CAPITALS to express it. I wish Superman would save me! Clever girl!

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  3. Anonymous4 April 2014 at 07:32

    brilliant

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  4. Unknown9 May 2014 at 12:56

    Fantastic sentences Eliese.

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