Wednesday 2 April 2014

Matthias' 5 Sentence Challenge


Bravely  I tiptoed into the deep dark damp tunnel . Suddenly I heard a loud scary growl. The growl was getting louder and LOUDER! It was as loud as one hundred giants screaming at a football match . I tried to sprint quickly away but the 'thing' grabbed my ankle.
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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous2 April 2014 at 14:26

    I love your use of adverbs and alliteration.
    I wonder what the 'thing' is...

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  2. Anonymous3 April 2014 at 11:49

    Fantastic work Matthias you are very clever! Love mummy daddy and Gabrielle xx

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  3. Louise Killeen4 April 2014 at 02:38

    Wow Matthias I would love to hear what happens next!

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  4. Anonymous8 April 2014 at 10:59

    Well done Matthias it is a brilliant start to your story. Much better than .my bedtime stories. Grandad. X

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  5. Anonymous14 April 2014 at 12:45

    Wow Matthias! What brilliant writing; it's better than some of my children's (I teach year 6!) My favourite sentence is 'It was as loud as one hundred giants . . . .'
    I might just magpie that, if that's ok?
    Mrs Willis - year 6 teacher in Bolton

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