Thursday 11 September 2014

A New Year! A New Story!

Axel Storm By Shoo Rayner
This week we have been reading the excellent story Axel Storm: Diamond Moon by Shoo Rayner (you can follow him on twitter @shoorayner and find his YouTube account here). We really enjoyed the story and decided to retell the story, but parts were missing from our retllings. Different groups could remember diffrent part so we got together and drew our different parts on a class story board. We checked with the book and remembered almost all of it!

 Here are the story boards:




Why not get your child to retell the story?
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10 comments:

  1. Anonymous12 September 2014 at 03:22

    Fabulous story telling Year 2 from Mr. Needle

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  2. Unknown13 September 2014 at 03:03

    Evie loved telling me all about Axel and his adventure. I wonder if I can get a diamond moon. Fab story map year 2, I loved it. Kirsty (Evie's Mum)

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  3. Dom13 September 2014 at 15:21

    What great story telling and well remembered. I really enjoy reading your blog all the way from Australia. From Zach's Uncle Dominic.

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  4. SassyHelen14 September 2014 at 06:33

    Abby really enjoyed telling me all about Axel Storm's secret mission to help his Uncle to test the defences at Museum. Abby liked when the Egyptian Mummy's case opened up and Axel's Cousin was inside. It's a lovely story and a great story map Year 2, Well Done!

    (Abby's Mum and Dad)

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  5. Unknown14 September 2014 at 10:40

    WOW, Year 2! What a super story map.
    Really enjoyed listening to the adventures of Axel Stone.
    Great work,
    Emma (Lucy Atkinson's mum).

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  6. Anonymous14 September 2014 at 10:57

    Lillie-mai and Caisie-leigh loved telling me this story. Caisie-leigh remembered quite a lot which considering she does'nt usually enjoy stories is very nice to hear. Lillie-mai loved that the parents got involved by leaving a comment here. Both are really enjoying their new work in year 2.

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  7. Unknown15 September 2014 at 00:28

    Great storyboard year 2. Hope you enjoy writing about the story today in class. Zach B enjoyed pointing out what he contributed to on the flip chart paper. Keep up the good work I will be reading all about work each week on this blog.

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  8. Unknown15 September 2014 at 01:22

    Great storyboard year 2. Hope you enjoy writing about the story today in class. Zach enjoyed pointing out his contribution to the flip chart activity. I will keep reading your blog each week as I am sure it will be very interesting.

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  9. Unknown16 September 2014 at 13:56

    This looks great Y2! I am putting this story on my "To Read" list!

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  10. Anonymous17 September 2014 at 00:55

    Good work, very interesting. We will keep trying to convince Matteo to summarize the story for us. I think, this is a good exercise to teach children how to summarize stories. Well done.
    Franco (Matteo's dad)

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