Wednesday 17 September 2014

Axel Storm: The Adventure Begins

We have been reading Axel Storm: Diamond Moon and have chosen our favourite segment to write, Everyone wanted to write about the part where Axel and Uncle Raffles begin Axel's training. This is Claudia's. 

Claudia's Axel Storm
We used Pie Corbett's idea of rehearsing what we wanted to write as a class and retold it a few times with actions before going back to our places and writing. 

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  1. Shoo Rayner18 September 2014 at 01:35

    Yay! Go Claudia! :D

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  2. Anonymous18 September 2014 at 12:59

    Great writing Claudia, well done and I really like that you added your own parts to the story as well. Keep up the good work. Dad & Mum

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  3. Anyas grama and grandad2 October 2014 at 09:01

    Good work year 2 it was very interesting. Carry a pencil and a piece of paper or a book so that you can write your ideas and draw a picture of things so that you don't forget it.

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