Alex's 5 Sentence Challenge

This picture depicts a train station.  It has alot of gates. The train is as fast as litning.  Its steem is like a cloud.  It can cary suit cases but it cant cary a car.  Until you get on the train you have to wate.

 

Jessica's 5 Sentence Challenge

"Tickets please" boomed the conductor.

Sensibly the engineer wore grey overalls so his own clothes would stay clean.

A shiny long bright red train ready for a fast and exciting journey.

The weary tired porter pushed the cumbersome cart. 

Excitedly and proudly the seafaring smart dressed sailor told lady in the ticket office that he was going home to see his family after a long time at sea.

 

Kacey's 5 Sentence Challenge

In the super 6 week holidays, a little girl was waiting for a massive red train to go on holiday to cadbury's world.

Finally, it arrived roaring and echoing coming through the enormous dark train station, she and her family was waiting for 4 hours but it was the wrong train, they had to run to the steam engine.

They got to the steam engine and climbed In the dark brown doors as the driver made the engine  let off a really loud CHOO CHOO after the choo choo  it fired a clowd of grey steam into the air.

The steam made her jump and she was scared for a moment.

She took a deep breath, but before they new it they was there.

Harriet's 5 Sentence Challenge

The dusty old train let out a big, noisy whistle that made me jump with fright!

The train cannot set off yet on its journey but the engineer is working as fast as he can, so we will have to wait or we can take the tram.

Quickly we have run to the tram station, oh no, we have forgotten our luggage!

As quick as lightening, we run back to see the train porter and said "please stop we need our luggage".

I am feeling so tired, my breath is running out and my legs feel really numb but I am happy that I can go on the tram to my holidays.

Maisie's 5 Sentence Challenge

The Train Station.

 

A lonely, old lady was sat waiting at the train station for her son, who she missed so much to arrive home.

She sat through rain, snow, sun and strong blizzards, as she waited patiently for her son.

One busy morning, on platform seven a big, noisy, but very dirty train arrived, it was train 109.

Her very special son leaped off train 109 and couldn't wait to see his mum!

Through the thick smoke the old lady saw her son, she was so happy she ran down the platform and gave him a massive hug!

 

Milly's 5 Sentence Challenge

The driver sounded the horn at the train very slowly.

The little boy raised up his hands with excitement.

It was very busy at the station.

There are lots of families at the station.

The worker at the station had lots of luggage to carry.

 

Kenna's 5 Sentence Challenge

The busy train station all hustle and bustle.

What time does the train leave?

We need to get a ticket and go through gate number seven.

The steam rose like clouds in the sky.

All aboard, let’s go!