Matthias' 5 Sentence Challenge

Slowly, the black shiny train pulls into the station.

Cases as big as boulders are pushed along the platform.

Excited, happy families are off on an adventure.

Smiling, the man picks up his suitcase and walks quickly over to the ticket man.

The bored old ticket collector who has a frowning face grumpily collects the tickets.

Harry's 5 Sentence Challenge

A man ran to get a ticket to get on a train.

He showed it to the ticket officer so he could get through the gates.

He got through the gates to platform 5.

He got on the train and put his luggage away and sat down .

He had a nice journey going to Italy.

Pheobe's 5 Sentence Challenge

… At the train station …

 

Happily the joyful man waved.

Whilst fixing the train, the man who was called Joe, was chatting to the little boy.

Patiently, the people queued up whilst waiting for their train.

The man who looked very hot was pushing a trolley that had a lot of heavy bags on it.

The man, who seemed very confused, asked the guard what was going on.

Lucas' 5 Sentence Challenge

One sunny morning, there were lots of people in the train station, full of steam. Smiling, a wheel tapper was tapping the wheel with a metal stick and if it made a noise it needed fixing or it would break down. A boy was begging to get a ticket for his family while another man was pushing a trolley full of suitcases.  There was an orange automatic train which looked like it could go as fast as lightening and a steam train would go as slow as a snail. An excited family walked past the gate and they wanted to go on one of the trains but they didn’t know which train to get on for their holiday.

Eden's 5 Sentence Challenge

In the station it was as loud as thunder, the people were as busy as bees.

Two birds watched as the tired old man slowly pushed the heavy trolley along

'Is the train on time ?', the 109?'the lady in red quietly said

'Yes', answered the man in blue 'I will get a ticket for you'

Don't forget to have a great time  when you visit Crewe.

Mia's 5 Sentence Challenge

The sailor, who was feeling very jolly because it was his first time on a train, was buying his ticket. He giggled.

Nearly all of the people lined up in each platform, though some others were standing next to the train.

Queuing, the people watched train 109 being fixed by the engineer, who was holding a dirty screwdriver and wearing a white hat.   

The train’s engine was as noisy as a lion roaring loudly through your ear!

Christina's 5 Sentence Challenge

The trains are going, the lights are on.

In the distance the bright red train stood at Platform 8.

There was a man who let pretty people through but one boy had not got his ticket!

The black steam train stood at Platform 7 yet had not one girl or boy on the train but the steam was pouring from the funnel.

The boy quickly bought his ticket and jumped on the bright red train as the whistle blew – the train   roared like a lion as it left Platform 8 on its journey to...