Emma,
who had become lost in the forest was starting to get worried. Then she saw an
old, wrinkly tree with a little red door. The door was as red as rubies.
Excitedly, she crept up to the red door. Shaking, her hand reached for the
shiny, black door handle.
Friday, 13 March 2015
Thursday, 12 March 2015
Anya's 5 Sentence Challenge
Quietly, Mia knocked on the shiny, curved fairy door it was made out of an oak tree it looked very old. Mia, who knocked on the door, saw 2 fairies as Mia was admiring the 2 fairy she was shrinking to there size but then she noticed. She … said ‘’Hello’’ so the fairies said’’ Hi’’ the fairies hair looked like banana milkshake also the fairies and Mia looked like twins it wood be impossible to tell them apart .Then the 2 fairies said ‘’ Come in I bet you it is ffreeezing!!! out there then the fairies led Mia into a big, round room were the Queen was right under there noise. But what Mia didn’t no that she was their twin sister but then the fairies noticed and they lived happily ever after.
Alex's 5 Sentence Challenge
As the
girl looked, she noticed in the distance a tiny red door.
As the
girl got closer the fairies hushed inside.
The tree
bark was old and rough.
Quietly
the girl whispered "Hello, anybody home?"
The red
door had been neatly painted.
Zach B's 5 Sentence Challenge
The red
door is as bright as a postbox.
Quietly
the little girl knocked on the door.
The White
statues are as bright as freshly laid snow.
As she
tip toed to the door she noticed it was at the base of an old silvery barked
tree.
The
little girl, who had a flowery jacket on, waited for someone to answer the
door.
Lucy's 5 Sentence Challenge
As quiet
as a mouse, the girl tiptoed to the door.
The shiny
red door creaked open
Whipering,
the little girl spoke quietly.
The girl,
who had ginger hair, sat patiently by the small door.
Her coat
was as flowery as a garden.
Friday, 6 March 2015
Year 2 Spellings for 13th March
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